Only parts B2d, B2di and paty C need to be edited and chaned everything else I s

Only parts B2d, B2di and paty C need to be edited and chaned everything else I scored perfect on I just need help editing the essay for these parts because I can’t figure out these parts
Approaching CompetenceThe explanation recommends 3 action items, but 1 or more recommendations are not appropriate for improving personal perceived leadership effectiveness, or the explanation does not logically explain, with specific details, how each action item would improve personal leadership effectiveness.
EVALUATOR COMMENTS: ATTEMPT 1
The submission discusses how increasing the understanding of management styles and improving self-control abilities will improve personal perceived leadership effectiveness. However, a third action item could not be located.
Approaching CompetenceThe explanation does not logically describe how the chosen leadership theory supports each of the recommended action items in part B2d, or the explanation is not supported with a scholarly source.
EVALUATOR COMMENTS: ATTEMPT 1
The submission discusses how self-regulation aligns with the Transformation Leadership Theory. However, the alignment of action items to chosen leadership theory is not fully developed. Aspect B2d needs to be addressed prior to addressing this aspect.
Not EvidentA leadership profile of the candidate is not provided.
EVALUATOR COMMENTS: ATTEMPT 1
The submission discusses the results of the self-assessments and perceived leadership effectiveness. However, a completed leadership profile that is based on the results of the assessments and contains each of the given components could not be located.

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